Thriller Locations

First Location: CNS girls toilets

For the very first scene in our opening, we'll will be using the students toilets at CNS as makeshift public toilets. Orignally we were going to use the public topilets in long stratton but came to the conclusion that the combination of the geographical location and the fact that filming in public toilets is difficult because of legal and spatial reasons means that we decided to film the scene in the toilets at school. We decided to use the girls toilets as the majority of our group were female and so it made sense for us to use the girls toilet. There are three female toilets at CNS and having visited all three we decided to use the largest one. In addition to having the largest space possible to work with it also had plain white walls which would be perfect for adding a bleak, grimy look to the scene. However whilst the space and look of the toilet's walls were positives there were also negatives to consider and problems to overcome. The taps for example were not ordinary twist taps and instead needed to be pushed down to work. Whilst this initially seemed a problem as we were intending to have a close up of the main character turning the tap on, in time we decided that with careful hand positioning this detail could be overcome. As well as this many modern day toilets use these kind of taps and so if it couldn't be overcome it would add to the reality of our product. Another problem with the toilets was the fact that it would be busy at times. However it was a lot more accessible and easy to vacate than genuine public toilets and did possess any of the legal problems filming in public toilets had and so we were happy to use this location.

Second Location: Chapelfield Gardens Bandstand

Originally we were hoping to film
somewhere like here: The Old Bakery Cafe

Chosen location: Band Stand 

The scene of meeting between the two characters changed drastically overtime. Initially the plan was to use a cafe or small bar for the meeting and have the two characters sit across a table from one another. We began by contacting cafe's and bars we knew of asking whether it would be possible to film there. While we contacted around 8 places only 3 replied and they all refused us. It quickly became apparent that it would be incredibly difficult to film in a cafe or bar and so we had to alter our location. After discussion we decided that the transaction scene could happen outside on a picnic bench or park bench. We decided that scoring in Norwich would be our best option and so we did so. Having scouted many locations we finally settled on the band stand in Norwich's Castle Meadow. While it was completely different from our original idea, the space was ideal and it was not likely to busy. The positives of this new location was that there was ample space for filming, it was in a central location and so could be got to quickly and  that it was not likely to be busy or full of people. However the disadvantages were that it was outside and so noise could be an issue; there was a possibility people could be in there when we wanted to film and it would not fit the theme of our thriller as well as average cafe. However as we knew that cafes and bars were not an option we decided that the band stand was our next best option and decided t use it for the transaction scene. The space of the band stand was excellent and allowed for a variety of interesting shots and this , we decided, would lend itself to our film.

Third Location: Underpass

Chosen location: underpass

Finally the final chosen location of the death scene also changed a lot from our initial ideas. Our original plan was to have the death scene happen either in a cobbled alley way in the old part of the city or near a church where there was intense ground lighting that we could use. Having scouted these locations out we decided that neither of these would fit our thriller and would instead give the death scene more of a film noir style. This is because the alleyways we found were very stylistic and did not fit with the other gritty locations and the church was again too stylistic and did not fit with the our other chosen locations. As well as this, because of their central locations, these places were nearly always busy and getting an isolated death scene would be difficult. Instead we chose to use an underpass near the outskirts of the city. The underpass had many great positives: it was lit with very bright, intense lights which we could utilise when filing, allowing us to experiment with shadows, it was rarely busy as a result of its locations on the outskirts of the city and it was heavily grafted adding to the realistic, gritty locations we had already chosen. While it was difficult logistically for us to get to, this was the only negative and we conclude that it was the perfect location for our death scene.

Q5. How did your film attract/address your audience?

EDITED 07/04/16: Q2- How does your thriller film opening represent particular social groups?

In our thriller opening we have challenged the stereotypical gender roles often portrayed in film. In particular we are challenging the traditional role of women in society through our use of them as the main characters in our thriller opening. While in almost all thrillers-  including film noir and British gangsters- women are portrayed as the secondary gender behind the protagonist male, in our thriller we decided we wanted to challenge this stereotype and flip this around, making the two main characters female.

By challenging gender stereotypes in the way our film is very modern and anti-traditional. This modern representation of women fits with the gritty, realistic tone of the film as a whole and this anti-sterotpyical portrayal of gender is initially created by the opening scene and titles. The first shot of our thriller is an uncomfortable, birds

eye view shot of the main female character entering a gritty, dirty toilet. This first shot instantly gives the audience and idea of the bleak, realistic and more importantly modern tone of the film throughout. This is strengthened by the fact that the first character the audience sees is a female one, immediately challenging the tradition of placing the focus on men rather than women. This challenging, modern tone is reinforced through the font of

Modern, brutal font for credits

the titles. The bold sans serif font "Bebas Neue"we chose for the credits is very modern and brutal and again reinforces the realistic and gritty nature of the film. By immediately linking the main, female character with this realism and grittiness the role of women throughout thrillers is already being confronted and challenged. In film noir women were either glamorised and sexualised or seen as femme fatal characters simply there to entice and endanger men. The portrayal of women in our thriller contrasts this completely by placing the main female character immediately in a dark, bleak world.

By making links to the way older thrillers such as film noir style films depicted women, our challenging and altering of the stereotypical portrayal of women in such films is made clearer and more effective. For instance in the toilet scene there is a claustrophobic, close up of the main female character applying a dark red lipstick. This is a reference to the way scarlet lipstick and clothing is

Film noir femme fatale

traditionally used in film to portray a woman as  either lustful and sexual or dangerous such as a femme fatal character in film noir. However by using a very claustrophobic, close up shot of our character applying the lipstick in combination with the bleak, gritty setting, it signifies the fact that the makeup, and furthermore the glamour associated with it, doesn't quite fit her. It's as if she's trying to plaster over the cracks in her broken personality with the lipstick in an attempt to make her seem more classy and glamorous. By including this reference to the film noir portrayal of women, our realistic, modern one is strengthened as the lipstick highlights the contrasting nature of the two representations.



By having the main protagonist as a woman, the audience is left in no doubt that our film is using a modern and challenging portrayal of gender roles that fits the realism and grittiness created by the plot and locations. This portrayal of gender is is further made parent by the detective character.

Detective from film noir

The costume and role of the detective character are direct references to film noir: a rogue, corrupt, secretive detective dressed in a long overcoat and dark glasses that portray his enigma and isolation.

Detective from our thriller opening

The character is an incredibly masculine one with almost every detective of this nature in film noir being played by a man. Left is a photo from a film noir showing the traditional male character of the detective in the classic costume. By taking this role and keeping everything the same except the gender of the character, the stereotypical roles of gender in thriller is confronted and challenged. By doing this women in our thriller are seen entirely as the dominant gender as both the main character and the secondary one are female. It shows the women are capable of being not just either sexual or dangerous but everything in between. From a damaged but resilient protagonist looking for answers in a modern, bleak world to a corrupt, rogue detective who has seen it all leaving her hard-boiled and dry.



Our thriller entirely marginalises men. Both the main protagonist and the detective are female leaving only the final hooded figure. The final character who only appears briefly in one shot is not specified a gender however. While in reality the actor was male, as the audience only ever see their hooded behind there is no way of them knowing for certain.

By not including any characters who are clearly men, the modern representation of genders in our thriller is made more effective. In many thrillers women are either secondary character or are completely marginalised and left out of the film. By flipping this concept and making women the absolute dominant gender in our thriller, we are creating an original and challenging representation of that particular social group. In many other British Gangster films such as 'Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels" and "Essex Boys" the dark, gritty world focuses around masculine criminality. We wanted to obtain the bleak, hopeless tone that is synonymous with British Gangsters while challenging the stereotypical representation of gender and by making women the predominant gender and by marginalising men I think we have achieved this.

Q6. what have you learnt about new technologies from the processes of constructing this project

Throughout the process of creating my thriller opening, from pre-production to production to post production, I have learnt about a range of new technologies as well as how they can help and benefit aspiring film makers.


As a whole, new technologies are incredibly empowering, giving the general public the ability to create content of a professional standard. It's now not just professional, Hollywood studios that create films and tv programmes, instead as a result of accessible new technologies and websites its any bod who wants to. New technologies are providing people with digital citizenships and are helping to democratise the industry; giving power to the consumers. It's helping film makers communicate and collaborate and is helping to give creative power to those who once would not have had such power.

EDITED 07/04/16: Q3. What kind of media institution might distribute your product and why?

What kind of cinema is most likely to exhibit our film?

The genre of our film is predominately British Gangster; the setting, plot and colour palette all take inspiration from dark, British films. However it also has stylistic aspects linking it to Film Noir so in this sense it possesses an arthouse-like aesthetic. This hybrid between bleak, British grittiness and sleek, stylish Film Noir means that our film would not be out of place in either mainstream cinemas such as Vue or Odeon nor would it not suit arthouse exhibitors such as Cinema City. In both cinemas there would be audiences my film would appeal to. In the mainstream cinemas, there would be a bigger audience who perhaps wouldn't recognise or appreciate the references to film noir but would enjoy the plot of the film as well as it's bleak, dark tone throughout. While in arthouse exhibitors such as Cinema City, there would be audiences familiar with the stylistic and costume references to film noir and so this aspect would appeal to them. However on the whole, I think our thriller would be better suited in mainstream cinemas. While our thriller does make reference to film noir in an arthouse fashion, in general our film would not be classed as an arthouse film. Almost all aspects of our film take influence from British Gangster, a genre which in the past has proven popular with a large demographic of people. As a result of this, our film could entice large audiences and so would be better suited in more mainstream cinemas. Films such as "Lock, stock and two smoking barrels" and "Sweeney" were exhibited in mainstream cinemas and did successfully, drawing large audiences. The violent, gritty nature of our film perhaps wouldn't fit the artistic style of films regularly shown at cinema city. Additionally our films target audience of men aged between 18-25 are much more likely to visit mainstream cinemas instead of arthouse ones and so cinemas such as Odeon or Vue would be far better suited for our thriller.

How could online streaming services offer new distribution options?

In recent years there has been a huge rise in the amount of films available to watch at home. Services such as Love Film, Netflix and Mubi mean that the cinema is now not the only way to experience new films. These services not only make it incredibly easy for anyone to access a huge variety of films in seconds but also act as a recommendation service giving people suggestions on what they should watch based on their previous viewings. Our film would work very well with these modern distribution methods. Because of the independent nature of our film, online streaming sites such as Netflix would give our film the opportunity to reach a far wider audience. People who want to find and watch new, independent films can do so extremely easily on Netflix as in contrast to cinema, no film is promoted more than any other. In addition to this, Netflix provides suggestions based on previous films a user has watched. This means that audiences who are seen to be watching thrillers or British Gansgter films have a higher chance of being recommended our film. Our target audience of 18-25 year old males are the demographic most likely to use these new services and so these new ways of online distribution would be a perfect option for our film.

Final Cut

EDITED 07/04/16: Q4. Who is your target audience?

Deciding on who the target audience of my thriller would be was essential in creating a successful and interesting opening. By deciding early on who my target audience would be, I could understand their likes and dislikes and implement techniques and aspects in to my thriller opening that would make it appeal to them. To help identify who my target audience would be I looked at online ratings and statistics of films that influenced and inspired my thriller opening to gain a better understanding of the kind of person who would watch mine. To do this I used IMDb, a huge online database of films and tv programs. IMDb has information regarding the film itself, user ratings and reviews and information about the demographic of people who watched and enjoyed the film. By analysing and reviewing the audience of films similar to mine, I was able to obtain an idea of the kind of person who was most likely to watch and enjoy my film. I looked at the age and gender of the people who watched and enjoyed the film to give me a rough idea of my average target audience. Having done this I then used the user submitted reviews to give me a more detailed idea of the kind of person who would be interested in my film. Looking at the wording of their reviews, the things they reference, and the overall knowledge of film they posses I was able to create a quite detailed depiction of these films average viewer and from this I was able to understand the kind of audience most likely to watch my thriller opening.

Using the knowledge and information obtained from this research I created a profile of my films target audience. This is a description of the kind of person who would enjoy my thriller.

This is John. John is a 25 year old english male who is enthusiastic about films among other modes of media text. John watches the majority of the films he sees at home either via streaming sites such as Netflix or on DVD. John watches films recommended to him by friends or family or by the online recommendations Netflix gives him. John does this as he knows that his friends and family enjoy and understand similar sorts of films to him. John is not a fan of main stream, block buster films. Instead he prefers obscure, low budget, well made films made by intelligent directors starring excellent, but usually underground actors. John is very sociable and intelligent and likes to read around topics that interest him. He remembers the names of the actors and directors who star in his favourite, non-mainstream film and references them often in conversation or when talking about film. Away from film, John enjoys books, TV programs, Youtube channels and music. Similar to his film taste, John prefers underground, alternative bands as apposed to the mainstream chart music. He goes to lots of gigs and enjoys the social/cultural side the music brings. While John is an entirely normal, sociable person he enjoys media texts that have a darkness/grittiness to them. Film genres such as British Gansgter interest him as he likes to see how they establish the dirtiness and grittiness of Britain. As well as this genre, recently John has become interested in Scandinavian thrillers such as "The Bridge" and "The Killing" as he enjoys the bleak, dark tone of them. John lives in the outskirts of a large, ex-industrial city and likes it when films represent this bleakness and use it for their benefit. John likes looking for deeper meanings in life and enjoys it when films raise questions about his own morality as well as the morality of the characters involved.

EDITED 07/01/14: Q1- In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

My thriller falls in to the category of British Gangster. Throughout my piece I have both used and challenged the conventions of this genre to create and interesting and original piece of film.

Opening of 'Essex Boys'

Locations

The locations of British Gangster films are bleak, gritty, common places that are synonymous with the industrial outskirts of British cities. By using these locations, the dark, hopeless tone of the films are better created. In my thriller, I took heavy inspiration from these kinds of locations and adopted the idea that gritty locations help portray the dark nature of the film.

Figure 1

Figure 2

In 'Essex boys' locations are used effectively to convey a bleakness which epitomises the tone of the film. The locations of my thriller such as those seen in figure 1 and 2 imitate this as the locations are extremely bleak and common around England. The large brick walls in figure 1 create connotations of hopelessness as the audience recognises them from the countless high rise developments that are present in the outskirts of all British cities. In addition to this the presence of the small character in the centre of them makes them seem very consuming as if the bleakness if swallowing her. In Figure 2 the combination of the dirty, gritty bridge as well as the grey, uninspiring building behind and the equally grey overcast sky all convey a desolate tone as if the character is trapped in a world of bleakness and grey. Furthermore the sky, traditionally a symbol of freedom and escape, is overcast and grey and so epitomises the lack of escape the character faces. 'Essex Boys' was the inspiration for the choice of location in my thriller as it highlights the way British Gangster films use locations to portray the tone of their productions. Additionally the use of vanishing points in figure 2 was also inspired by 'Essex Boys'. Throughout the opening of 'Essex Boys' obscured vanishing points are used metaphorically to portray a hopeless and bleak tone as if the audience can never quite see out of the dark, criminal world the characters inhabit (see photo of Essex Boys opening). By integrating obscured vanishing points in to our locations and shots such as in figure 2, they are made to seem

even more hopeless and bleak; they have the same impact on our audience making them feel as if there is no way out.

Costume

Alice Creed

While my thriller uses the conventional locations of a British Gangster, the choice of costumes challenges and develops the expectations of the genre. In British Gangsters the costumes worn are usually dull and dark to portray the unglamorous and un-stylistic nature of the films. Costumes such as these are used throughout 'Alice Creed'; the main characters are either in very common attire or in all black with balaclavas. However in my thriller I wanted to use costumes that conveyed messages and meanings about the characters who were wearing them.

 For the main character, I wanted a costume that both inferred her broken and disjointed life and personality as well as her resilience and desire to still be glamorous and attractive. For the broken part of her character I used costume conventions of British Gangster. She wore very ordinary, slightly damaged clothing: a black hoodie, ripped tights, dark top and wore her hair in a every day messy bun. However for the resilient part of her personality I decided to use costume conventions of film noir; red shoes and red lipstick. These costume features are heavily associated with film noir and typically portray a sense of danger as well as femininity. I think the hybrid costume that she wore in the final product perfectly conveyed the two sides of her personality: broken and damaged but resilient.



For the detective character I decided that using costume aspects that link to film noir would work well in regards to challenging and adapting the conventions of British Gangster. The detective in my thriller opening wore a long, brown overcoat, dark sunglasses and a large wrist watch. These are all things the typical film noir detective character would wear. However to develop this traditional character design, I decided the detective character should be female and thus an original development was created. By making the detective female, a more modern and so more British  Gangster like character was created. Whilst the costume still retains the majority of its influence from film noir, it is still a hybrid between the two genres in the way it is adapted.

By challenging and adapting the costume conventions of real British Gangster films by merging them with aspects of film noir costumes, my thriller opening has an original and modern feel.

Sound and Titles

During my thriller research I looked closely at how the British Gangster film 'Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels' titles are used to enhance the opening of the film. Instead of in more modern, sleek looking thrillers such as 'Layer Cake' where the titles are integrated in to shots and are even swept in via movement in the scene, British gangster films such as 'Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels' and 'Essex Boys' have titles behind black screens which are in no way integrated with the shots. The effect of this is a cold, brutal title sequence which helps connote the tone of the film that follows. I took inspiration from this and adopted this kind of sequence for my thriller opening. I think this conventional title sequence both helps creates a slow build of tension as well as connotes a sense of brutality; in this film things are either black or white. The font I chose also helps to portray this. Typically, British Gangster films use bold, sans serif fonts in their title sequence to help portray the hard, bleak nature of the film; there is no stylish font. I stuck to this convention and for both my credits and the title of

my thriller used sans serif fonts. These worked well with the unintegrated, black background to give the opening a hard, bleak tone. My thriller took inspiration font-wise and title sequence-wise from "Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels". The font we used for credits was also highly contemporary in it's style; a bold, clear font is very fashionable in the modern day. This contemporary, modern font links to the fact that our film is also very modern. The grittiness and realism of it is a style common in modern day thrillers as it allows the audience to engage more with the film. Additionally the gender roles of my film are original and challenging convention further strengthen the contemporary feel to my thriller. By using fashionable, modern fonts for our credits the audience immediately understands better our thriller. I decided that the standard conventions would work well for my thriller. I was heavily influenced by the way the dietetic sound in 'lock stock' carried on underneath the titles. This technique allowed the opening to steadily build tension and made it less like a dramatic trailer for a large, block buster action film. I used this technique in my thriller and kept the wild track of the toilet location underneath my titles. As a whole my title sequence adopts many of the common techniques found in British Gangster films; in this aspect it is a very conventional.

Sound

As well as using conventional sound editing techniques in the title sequence of my thriller, as a whole the use of sound in my thriller follows the rules and conventions of thriller films. One way it does so is by the using fake atmos tracks to give a constant sound to the scene location. For example in the scene when the main character is walking over the bridge above the heavy traffic, the audience can hear the sound of a busy wet road with vehicles driving along. As well as this there are distant sirens. This sound was not recorded on location and was instead added during editing to make the scene feel more realistic as well as to give it a slightly bleaker, more hopeless tone via the addition of the distant sirens. The sirens make the audience feel as criminality and darkness is omnipresent in the city the main character resides whilst the traffic sound simply adds to the harsh realism of the opening. This technique is used in almost all thriller but is especially noticeable in the thriller "Se7en". In the opening to "Se7en" the sound of the city including traffic, sirens, rain and shouting can always be heard. This makes it seem as if the dark city is always seeping in to Morgan Freeman's character and is inescapable. While not the focus of the film, the fact that the bleak sounds of the city can always be heard means that the film constantly has a dark, hopeless tone. By taking inspiration from "Se7en" I integrated this technique in to my thriller and it helped to both add a quality to my thriller by making each shot transition smoothly but also helped to maintain a bleak tone.

Additionally, my thriller also uses non-diegetic sound-beds and drones to help gradually build tension. This technique is regularly used in countless films and is a simple yet effective way to let the audience know that something bad is about to happen. By gradually building up the volume of the intimidating drone, the audience becomes more aware of the threatening tone and so assumes something bad is about to happen. this is another example of how my thriller uses sound conventionally. I took inspiration from "Se7en" and other thrillers, using techniques common in film to add to the quality of my own production.

Camerawork

In my thriller opening I use a variety of shots and camera angles to both portray meanings and messages but also to link to some conventional and unconventional aspects of British Gangster films. Throughout my thriller, I use compositional techniques such as quadrants and rule of thirds to portray to the reader deeper meanings and messages. This technique is used in all sub genres of Thriller films including British Gangster films as a subtle yet effective and professional way to infer information about characters to the reader.

Alice Creed

Figure 3

For example in this shot from 'Alice Creed' quadrants are used to portray to the audience both the differences in the characters as well as the two story lines that are happening simultaneously on screen. This subtle and effective technique is used throughout 'Alice creed' to infer to the reader the multiple intentions of the characters. Taking inspiration from this, I implemented this technique in to my own thriller. As shown in figure 3, on one side of the shot in the distance is the main female character and on the other an imposing figure. This helps highlight the good and bad that is present throughout my thriller. By adopting techniques such as these in to my opening, the audience can infer deeper meanings than the ones clearly on show. Additionally using conventional, modern techniques such as this help help my thriller fit in to the genre of British Gangster.

However while I chose to implement these more modern compositional techniques I also included shots that make reference to other genres of thrillers such as film noir. In the scene where the main character is walking through an under pass I used a shot type that takes direct inspiration from 'The Third Man'- a film noir classic.

Shot from the third man

In this iconic shot from 'The Third Man', vanishing points, chiarascuro lighting and off centre composition all help to create a shot which connotes a bleakness and lack of hope. By having obscured vanishing points and a character placed slightly off centre the shot implies to the reader an imbalance that in turn creates an uneasy tone. The shot is representative of the tensions in Europe of the time, a feature prominent in most film noir. The shot is highly stylistic and an icon of the genre. In my thriller, I created a shot of the main character walking in an underpass that is heavily influenced by this shot. There are several obscured vanishing points, high contrast lighting and a character placed slightly off centre which all combine to create a shot that emanates unease. This shot comes directly

Shot from my thriller

before the death of the main character and so
 works well in building tension and creating an
 unnerving tone.

By taking inspiration from both conventional British Gangsters as well as Film Noir, the shots in my thriller have a wide variety of inspiration. This in turn creates an interesting and engaging opening that both adopts and adapts conventional British Gangster techniques.

Toilet Scene

figure 5

figure 6

figure 7

In the opening scene, a combination of shots are used to create a feeling of claustrophobia. The opening shot for example (figure 5) is directly above the main character and shows her in a grimy, small toilet space. As well as creating an uncomfortable tone of surveillance as if the audience is observing the character without her knowing, it also is a very claustrophobic shot as there is little space around the main character: she takes up most of the shot. This sense of claustrophobia is maintained throughout the opening scene. The use of obscured shot for example (figure 6) maintains this feeling of entrapment. half of the shot is taken up by the corner of a wall leaving only a very small space for the character. As well as this this shot helps maintain an uncomfortable tone as if the audience is watching her without er knowledge. The use of closeups also helps strengthen the tight, claustrophobic feel to the opening scene. Figure 7 shows the closeup of the main character applying lipstick. By providing the audience with an intrusive closeup of the main character doing something that would normally be private the uncomfortable, claustrophobic and overall gritty and harsh tone is maintained. By refusing to give the audience a long shot of the main character, the audience always feels incredible close to her strengthening the trapped, enclosed tone of the scene. By creating this harsh tone immediately, the audience quickly understands the nature of the film that is to follow allowing g them to engage with it more effectively. The inspiration for this claustrophobic opening comes from the film "Pi". Throughout "Pi" tight, claustrophobic shots are used to create

Shot from "Pi" that highlights the claustrophobia of the film

an uncomfortable tone that helps portray the
darkness and mental state of the main
character. We decided that we could adopt this technique in to our thriller to portray a darkness and harshness in regards to the main character and the world she inhabits.
 






Lighting and colour

High contrast, no key lighting

In thrillers the lighting and colour is used to portray meanings and messages about specific characters as well as the film as a whole. I adopted this convention and in my thriller I used both lighting and a specific colour palette to enforce the tone of my British Gangster thriller. The lighting throughout my thriller is not extreme in anyway: in almost every shot there is an equal balance of key, fill and back lighting and the effect of this is a lack of deep shadows. By keeping the lighting very natural throughout the bleak tone of the film is enhanced; nothing is too dark or too bright and instead everything is very average. As well as maintaining the bleak tone of the film, my keeping the lighting as ordinary and natural as possible the realism of the film is enhanced. The audience therefore can relate to the film more effectively as it feels even more realistic and harsh. The only time my thriller breaks this rule is in the final scene where the main character enters the underpass. At this point the lighting changes and becomes more artificial. There is minimal key lighting in this scene and so the characters face becomes shadowed and non-visible. By doing this, the lighting becomes more similar to film noir, chiaroscuro lighting and so the reference to "The Third Man" becomes more apparent and effective. Additionally this change in the lighting balance has metaphorical connotations. As the character nears her death, the shadowing of her face symbolises how the darkness of the city and world she lives in is finally overcoming her and engulfing her. While the lighting before this symbolised how her resilience was balancing the bleakness and hopelessness of her situation, as she nears her end the change in lighting represents the change in balance. In a way the lighting used in my thriller is conventional. The lighting prior to the final scene is common in British Gangsters such as "Essex Boys" and "Alice Creed" while the more high intensity lighting in the final scene is conventional in film noir such as in "The Third Man". However the use of both in one opening and the change between the two is not so conventional and more unique to my opening.

De-saturated colour palette makes everything seem bland and bleak

The colour palette of my thriller is very de-saturated and void of any bright colour. The effect of this is a very bleak overall look to my thriller. In the bathroom scene, this increases how dirty and grimy everything looks and in the outdoor scenes it makes the grey overcast sky more enhanced. To the audience it feels as if the hopelessness of the main characters situation has not only drained the happiness and hope she once had but is also taking away the bright colour of the world they see. Using a de-saturated colour palette is common in British Gangster thrillers such as "Essex Boys" and "Alice Creed" and so by using this technique my thriller is in this sense conventional.

Narrative

Throughout my thriller the main narrative code that is used is enigma. I used handful of other techniques used such as the foreshadowing created by the high pitched white noise in the title screen and then again in the murder seen but having researched thrillers extensively I decided that the main narrative code that I wanted to integrate in to my film was enigma. In almost every sub genre of thriller from film noir to neo-
noir, from British Gangster to crime thrillers enigma is used to captivate and engage with the audience by making them ask questions. By providing a sense of mystery an audience is immediately more interested as they have a desire to find out the answer. I decided to use this traditional convention of thrillers and use enigma throughout my thriller.

The opening scene immediately makes the audience question my thriller; they want to know why this woman is seemingly getting ready to go out somewhere in a public toilet. This combination of something that is normally done privately in a place that is very public creates a kind of confusion hat eventually leads to enigma. The audience know nothing about the main character and so can't know why she is preparing herself in the toilet. This enigma combined with the claustrophobic, uncomfortable camera shots makes the opening an effective and engaging way to start my thriller. The enigmatic tone of my thriller is continued as the main character meets with a detective. When the two meet and interact there is no dialogue. Having watched and studied "Essex Boys" I discovered that having two characters interact with no dialogue such as in "Essex Boys"' opening, is a fantastic technique for creating enigma. This is because the audience feel excluded: the two characters know exactly what's going on and as result do not even need to talk where as the audience are expecting to gain information about the situation from dialogue and do not get this satisfaction. To further enhance the enigma of my opening I decided to not use any dialogue at all. This leaves the audience with no way of getting their questions answered and so engages them more and more.

The envelope is symbolic of my thriller's enigma

Finally, I used a prop to optimise the enigmatic tone of my thriller: an envelope. An envelope is an item that holds information and can be opened to obtain that information and so metaphorically was a perfect choice to add further mystery to my production. The initial opening of my thriller combined with the lack of dialogue throughout means that even before the audience are introduced to the envelope they already have several questions that they are looking for answers to. When the envelope is introduced however, the audience feel as if this is what can bring light to some of their queries. However when the envelope is finally opened the audience only get to see the contents of it for a second before the screen goes dark and the main character is killed. By doing this the mystery and enigma of the thriller as a whole in intensified. The audience presume that the envelope will answer the questions that they have regarding the character and her situation while in reality it simply heightens the enigma.

Mystery and enigma is an essential part in all thrillers and by raising many questions in the opening of my Births Gangster thriller, I have engaged with and intrigued the audience making them more likely to watch and enjoy the rest of my film.

EDITED 07/04/16: Q7- How have I progressed from my preliminary task?

Rough Cut

Fonts

Storyboard

Treatment

The film begins with the sound of a public toilet: Dripping taps, the muffled sound of traffic and the sound of heels on a damp floor. The first shot is of a small hand wearing damaged rings turning a grimy tap off. The camera then cuts to a shot showing the reflection of a rundown looking woman in a mirror. She proceeds to wash and apply make up in the public toilet. Following this there is a close up of her taking out a clean, well looked after pocket watch and checking the time. Shots then show her walking through urban areas such as in front of high rise flats and also the fast undeveloped locations. Ambient sound in the background (traffic, general public). She walks in to a café and a shot shows her sit down opposite a suited figure. After pro-longed eye contact the Woman slides the envelope across the table towards the protagonist. She stares at it for a moment, glancing back at the detective, snatching the envelope and leaving the café. Over the shoulder shot shows a figure who had been watching the transaction at a separate table, get up and follows the Protagonist. The Young woman is shown walking down a quiet alley, and opening up the envelope. Close up of the contents shows a name followed by an address. The camera then cuts to show the woman growing emotional. Suddenly, the man who had been watching the transaction takes the pocket watch from her pocket and strangles her with the chain. He drops her body on the ground, takes the envelope, drops the pocket watch and walks away. Final shot- Pocket watch on the ground.

The character is established by taking influence from sin city. This is done by using the costume idea of glamour/ the colour red. Ideally, this establishes that our character is trying to be classy. Additionally, the colour red signifies the theme of danger/ a femme fatal. Dialogue is adapted from a film called Alice Creed, in this film, there is no dialogue, and communication is created via the concept of facial expressions and hand gestures. We took this as an inspiration as it adds an edge to the film, making it more enigmatic. Our chosen locations are very bleak and will be very de-saturated, which comes from the film Essex boys. Bleak locations also adds to the enigma and tension of the opening which is clearly developed in Essex boys.

Potential locations

Characters, costumes and props

Jessica Harvey

Below is a rough plan for how the main character of our Thriller, Jessica Harvey, should be dressed along with what props she should use during the opening of our Thriller. These will help establish her character to the audience.

Jessica Harvey is broken young adult. Having been badly affected by the sudden death of her father in her childhood her life is now at a dead end. She has come to learn not to trust or rely on anyone and as a result is lonely, defensive and vunerable. Despite this she is resilient and strong willed .Throughout the entire opening she doesnt say a word (influence from this comes from the opening of Alice Creed) and this trait optimises her stand-offish, naturally defensive attitude. The costume the she will wear will reflect her broken personality. She'll wear a dark red, casual dress with laddered old tights, and dark hoodie over the top of this. This will reflect her slightly dysfunctional personality as she is still trying to be glamorous and dress nicely as shown through the red dress but the dark hoodie show's the audience that her life is far from perfect. Literally it is keeping her warm from the cold but metaphorically it is a kind of darkness that is overshadowing her life. The ripped tights help to emphasise this as while the clothing on their own may seem glamorous as if she is trying to impress someone, the rips and ladders in them show that they are perhaps over worn and broken, representing her personality. On her feet she'll wear worn, slightly damaged red shoes with a slight heel as this helps to show the derelict glamour that resides within her. The makeup she applies in the opening scene is not applied well and is not of a good quality helping to reinforce her resilient but broken persona. Prop-wise the jewellery she wears reflects her broken further. On her ears she will wear small, dirty, cracked pearl earrings and on her finger an oxidised silver ring. These little details will show that she is trying her best to stay looking nice but her dark past is still disrupting her life to the point that new luxuries such as jewellery aren't affordable. The phone she owns is an old Nokia or flip phone to show that her life is difficult to the point where she cannot afford to replace unfashionable things. One item that helps establish the plot of the opening is her low quality name badge which she removes in the opening scene. This implies that she may have a very low paid job which helps portray her as someone who has reached a dead end in her life. The only item she owns that is in a good, almost pristine condition is a gold pocket watch she uses to check the time. It is shiny and immaculately kept. This helps provide a sense of enigma as it contrasts heavily with the rest of her personal items leading the audience to question why she has it and why it is such a good condition; it adds a depth to her character.

Detective

The policeman/detective character who provides Jessica Harvey with the envelope is not as significant as her and so not quite as much detail will go in to their costume or props.  They will wear a dark suit or dark trousers and a shirt with a long dark over coat over the top. They will wear a hat which could be pulled down to cover the majority of their face. This would add a sense of enigma to his character. Importantly, to help explain to the audience who this character is, he would own a police badge which could either be on his overcoat or suit jacket or in a wallet which he produces when paying for a coffee at the café. This will allow the audience to understand who this character is which will allow the plot to become clearer. Apart from these details, the detective character will stay fairly enigmatic.

Assassin

The character that eventually kills Jessica Harvey is the least important of the three characters. He will be dressed in all black; black trousers with either a black shirt or a black sweatshirt. His hair will be neat to portray to the audience his careful and deadly accuracy whilst killing. He will wear black gloves to symbolise his dark natured work. He will have no props as the item with which he kills Jessica will be her pocket watch.